меняем настройки по одной за раз
...и задолбал Рафальский. Ашыпки есть, их даже много )

The densely outspurt blood of me enraged,
The flocks of slowly floating pure-white snow,
A pair of red drops, falling from the edge
Then leaving slight marks on the face below.

The truth is that it didn't finish wrong,
It was already foreseen long ago;
In order to complete this painful song
There's one more thing I need to undergo.

Determination slowly packs up in my mind
Along with thought "At least I did my best"
There's nothing but the face that's left behind
And piece of metal, thrusted through my chest.

And thus, in silent slumber both we dive
Together now, right in the afterlife.

как вариант:

The truth is that it didn't finish wrong,
It was already long ago foreseen;
In order to complete this that painful song
I need to undergo just one more thing;